There is no denying I have been a very neglectful blogger. I hope to redeem myself with these next blogs. I have had the privilege
to critique some great writing lately and have been asked some really tricky questions.
PART 1 What is Voice?
Okay, sounds innocent enough but becomes thornier as
questions arise.
Q. Is 'voice' my
characters voice? Does this mean I am supposed to write in the voice of my
character?
A. Character
voice and Writers voice are not the same thing. In my opinion which is used
depends to some extent on the Narrative Mode; something we will look at in more
detail later. For now let's just take a closer look at voice and what it means.
If you have been critiqued and received comments on the
voice of your writing it is referring to your
voice as a writer, your unique style and use of language that makes your
writing yours. It is what
distinguishes your writing from that of other writers.
"The writer's voice is the individual writing style of an author, a combination of
idiotypical usage of syntax, diction, punctuation, character development, dialogue, etc., within a
given body of text (or across several works).[citation
needed] Voice can be thought of in terms of the
uniqueness of a vocal voice machine. As a trumpet has a different voice than a
tuba or a violin has a different voice than a cello, so the words of one author
have a different sound than the words of another. One author may have a voice
that is light and fast paced while another may have a dark voice."
I have seen a great deal of argument across the web on
exactly what constitute writers voice. For me it comes down to several things; the
structure of the writing (some writers use short sharp sentences while others use
longer), the style of language (flowery/articulate/basic and to the point), descriptiveness,
amount of adjectives and more.
Your characters must have their own unique voices of course!
This will come though in their internal narrative, dialogue, even in their
actions, movements and body language. All will build your characters voice and individual identity. You may
have several characters in one novel all with their own voice but yours will
remain the same.
Another way to think of it is to go to your bookshelf (I am
assuming if you are a writing yours is heavily stacked), find any published
book that switches character POV's. Read it from cover to cover. You will find
even if moving from character to character, from male to female, old to young,
no matter how different the characters, how vastly contrasting their voice, the
writer moves seamlessly from one to the other. It still feels like the same
book. The writers voice is what ties it all together, what stops it from
feeling like you have picked up a new book when the POV character changes.
More Voice Struggles
Q. Now I know the difference between Writers Voice and
Character Voice how do I bring it all together?
A. I believe it comes down to properly understanding Narrative
mode and Structure
Narrative mode will effect voice. For instance I recently
critiqued someone who used snippets of diary
extracts throughout their novel but continued in their own voice (in the same
format and structure). It didn't work. A diary excerpt is a place where the
writers voice would be dropped completely. The characters identity would need
to be completely assumed for it to have any authenticity. Understanding the
Narrative mode is an important part of understanding not only voice, but the structure
of your writing.
Part 2 will focus
on Narrative Mode & Part 3 will give
an overview of structure.
I hope you found this helpful! As always I would to hear
your thoughts, so please comment :)
Writers Funny
All my brain juice has been used up so today I am going to
steal my funny from Twitter buddy @CassandraPage01!
The past, the present
and the future all walked into a bar. It was tense...
Some really great advice Amber. I'm a writer too, I've done some chick lit and a funny parenting book called Cocktails at Naptime that was published down under. Come and say hi and let's have a cocktail some time! www.cocktailsatnaptime.com
ReplyDeleteHi Emma, thank you for stopping by! I will pop over and say hi :)
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